In this blog post, I read What is a Found Poem?, Sample Found Poem, and Visual Examples of Found Poems. I chose the "cut-up" method to create my found poem where I made a negative decision to get in the car with my dad who was under the influence of alcohol.
“The Car Ride” My dad got home from work. “Taylor let’s go.” Overpowering smell of beer entered my nose, I was angered. Driving down the curvy road, Our bodies jerked left and right. “Dad pull over!” He sped into an empty bar parking lot. My Siblings stared back at me in complete fear, crying. “Get out of the car.” I refused, “ Dad please just take us home” The tires crunched over a broken glass bottle, We rolled out of the empty bar parking lot. The dense clouds passed by, Tears falling from my eyes. Reflection
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Sabatino
10/22/2018 07:46:54 am
Found poem sustains the plot and some of the sub text from your narrative. I appreciate your reflective comments about setting and theme. Do you have specific ideas in mind that can help you revise the narrative? What types of sensory descriptions could you compose to deepen the story’s subtext?
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Colin
10/22/2018 01:12:27 pm
Really good descriptive poem, it gives good sub text and motifs from the narrative.
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